essay using certain words

Words to use:
enable competent ridiculous efficient in every possible situation to a certain extent assume chimpanzee precise equivalent vice versa intonation psychology theorist relate to formula relevant on one’s part go/be driven to the extreme
Essay:
Making mistakes ,to a certain extent, enables us to be more competent. On our part, we never want to make these ridiculous mistakes which have made us so embarrassed. However, theorists say it’s a efficient way to improve ourselves. For example, new speakers of a language always have problems in prononciation and intonation. They can’t get the precise tune when speaking, which causes laugh. Mistakes help us to learn, but it never means we should make more mistakes. Sometimes the equivalent words related to mistake are failure,death… Assume you are a scienctist ,and you are doing relevant experiments about making nuclear weapons. You use a formula wrongly and get wrong numbers. It’s not a serious thing when in school,for you can get it right with an eraser. But now you will fail your experiment with the wrong numbers,and if the situation is driven to the extreme, a lot of life will be lost for your mistake. Not only should people who do science work be careful,but also those in the field of psychology,politics should do so. The society affect every individual and vice versa. If we all make mistakes very often, our world will just be in a mess. We are humanbeings not chimpanzees or anything else, we can’t allow ourselves to make mistakes without a limit. Though mistakes can not be avoided, but we should at least try to avoid them in every possible situation